Speechless

A simple drift

A breeze over the countryside

Sculpting the world bit by bit

 

Creating and destroying

Choosing to give life

As easily as it can take it away

 

Forming rolling aimless waves

Out on the ocean

A beautiful sight at times

Yet an unpredictable outcome

 

What a simple drift can do.


Heya guys,

I promised you guys I would post something and here it is. I’m going to be honest and say I prefer my first poem which I wrote a while ago (A single snowflake) but then I spent a lot more time on it, refining it, and I had a clear idea of what message I wanted to convey but with this one I just kinda let my fingers take over not really thinking about a pattern or stresses or anything but just writing out what came to mind, like spilling my thoughts onto this post. πŸ˜‚πŸ’­It’s weird to describe. To all of the newcomers, this is only my second ever poem. Yes although I am nearing the end of my school experience I have only written two poems.β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‚Β So I would still appreciate any feedback. Please don’t hold back it’s through criticism that we learn!Β πŸ˜‰

So I know that before I said I wasn’t sure if I was going to make poetry an actual thing on my blog or if it was just that one time and I am still not sure but I have created a Category called Poetry for now!Β πŸ˜…πŸ˜Β I don’t know if I will be posting much though because they still don’t come to me as easily but when they do I promise to post them!

Anyway, I love you guys!!πŸ’™

Going offline,

Girlalert xxx

girlalert.here@yahoo.com

4 comments

  1. Rhiana · April 17, 2018

    Once again a beautiful poem that really opens up and shows a part of you. ❀️❀️❀️

    Liked by 1 person

    • girlalert · April 17, 2018

      Thx so much!! I am still a bit anxious about them because it’s only my second but yeah thx so much!! xxx

      Like

  2. pramegha · May 24, 2018

    A very beautiful poem 🌸

    Liked by 1 person

  3. girlalert · 26 Days Ago

    thank you so much I really appreciate it πŸ™‚ xx

    Like

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